From 06c17095b859bfcfc51c28fb9e00ff62e8c11120 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: madrilene <hola@lenesaile.com>
Date: Wed, 14 Feb 2024 10:12:45 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] copy: "based on" -> "built around"

---
 package.json       | 2 +-
 src/_data/meta.js  | 4 ++--
 src/pages/about.md | 2 +-
 src/pages/index.md | 2 +-
 4 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/package.json b/package.json
index 2f9b101..277227a 100644
--- a/package.json
+++ b/package.json
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 {
   "name": "eleventy-excellent",
   "version": "2.1.4",
-  "description": "Eleventy starter based on the workflow suggested by Andy Bell's buildexcellentwebsit.es.",
+  "description": "Eleventy starter built around the workflow suggested by Andy Bell's buildexcellentwebsit.es.",
   "author": "Lene Saile",
   "license": "ISC",
   "engines": {
diff --git a/src/_data/meta.js b/src/_data/meta.js
index 66c4b2c..4cfb9de 100644
--- a/src/_data/meta.js
+++ b/src/_data/meta.js
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ module.exports = {
   url: process.env.URL || 'http://localhost:8080',
   siteName: 'Eleventy Excellent',
   siteDescription:
-    'Eleventy starter based on the workflow suggested by buildexcellentwebsit.es',
+    'Eleventy starter built around the CSS workflow suggested by buildexcellentwebsit.es',
   siteType: 'Person', // schema
   locale: 'en_EN',
   lang: 'en',
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ module.exports = {
   themeBgColor: '#FBFBFB', // Manifest: defines a placeholder background color for the application page to display before its stylesheet is loaded
   opengraph_default: '/assets/images/template/opengraph-default.jpg', // fallback/default meta image
   opengraph_default_alt:
-    'Visible content: Eleventy starter based on workflow for Cube CSS, Every Layout, Design Tokens and Tailwind for uitility, based on the concepts explained in buildexcellentwebsit.es', // alt text for default meta image
+    'Visible content: Eleventy starter built around the CSS workflow for Cube CSS, Every Layout, Design Tokens and Tailwind for uitility, based on the concepts explained in buildexcellentwebsit.es', // alt text for default meta image
   blog: {
     // RSS feed
     name: 'My Web Development Blog',
diff --git a/src/pages/about.md b/src/pages/about.md
index ced613b..dd69c0b 100644
--- a/src/pages/about.md
+++ b/src/pages/about.md
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ youtube: true
 
 This starter uses modern CSS, fluid type & space, flexible Layouts and Progressive Enhancement, wrapped in a basic template.
 
-Based on the CSS boilerplate by Andy Bell and inspired by Andy's talk **'Be the browser’s mentor, not its micromanager'**.
+It is built around the CSS boilerplate by Andy Bell and inspired by Andy's talk **'Be the browser’s mentor, not its micromanager'**.
 
 If you want to know exactly how it all works, [read this article on piccalil.li](https://piccalil.li/blog/a-css-project-boilerplate/).
 
diff --git a/src/pages/index.md b/src/pages/index.md
index efed2b2..9cc89ed 100644
--- a/src/pages/index.md
+++ b/src/pages/index.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ blog:
 
 ## An Eleventy starter
 
-This [Eleventy](https://www.11ty.dev/) starter is based on [Andy Bell's](https://andy-bell.co.uk/) talk 'Be the browser’s mentor, not its micromanager' and its companion website buildexcellentwebsit.es.
+This [Eleventy](https://www.11ty.dev/) starter was inspired [Andy Bell's](https://andy-bell.co.uk/) talk 'Be the browser’s mentor, not its micromanager' and its companion website buildexcellentwebsit.es.
 
 In his words, it's about hinting the browser rather than micromanaging it, using progressive enhancement, CSS layout, fluid type & spacing, as well as modern CSS features.